JSteedla 

member since 03/06/2006 | last login 07/09/2012

I just put a short that I wrote called YOU'RE FIRED up on Funny Or Die. It stars Jill Bartlett (Comedy Central's "American Body Shop") and Josh Braaten (of "Semi-Pro"). I'd love it if you take a look, and if you like...

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I just put a short that I wrote called YOU'RE FIRED up on Funny Or Die. It stars Jill Bartlett (Comedy Central's "American Body Shop") and Josh Braaten (of "Semi-Pro"). I'd love it if you take a look, and if you like it, vote for it as "funny", and please please pass it on to all your friends! See it at: http://www.funnyordie.com/videos/f7fdce5e16/youre-fired-from-jstancari Thanks!

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  • A review of Victim8
    by JSteedla on 07/12/2009
    Victim8: Notes by page number: 1) FADE IN: goes in the left margin, not the right 1) no need to give Ray a name since we never meet him, giving him a name just makes me try to keep track of him, when in reality, I'll never meet him. Just call him something like MALE FRIEND 5) the computer face should be a (V.O.), since were hearing it via the speakers. Also, how does the... read
  • A review of SAVAGES
    by JSteedla on 07/09/2009
    Savages: Notes by page: 1) Do not number page 1 1) Do not number your scenes, that's for a shooting script only. 1) Should be 2 spaces after FADE IN: 1) careful of multiple characters whose names start with the same letter, like Clara and Carmen (both C's) as this can confuse the reader as they scan the dialogue. 1) careful of dropped commas, as there's a lot of them... read
  • A review of Senseless! (rev.)
    by JSteedla on 02/02/2009
    Senseless: Notes by page #: 1: should be two spaces after FADE IN: and before the first slugline 1: slugline is missing the DAY/NIGHT time element from the first slugline. 1: the actor's lines should be (V.O.) since they are not in the theater and are heard via the movie speakers. 1: maybe slug the MAN and WOMAN as ACTOR and ACTRESS? Also, they should be properly intro's... read
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Comments About JSteedla 22

  • kepow on 03/02/2010

    Hey dude, there's another one of these going on:

    http://bulletin.triggerstreet.com/viewtopic.php?t=50992&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0

    Let me know if you're planning to attend!
  • Chanel Ashley on 12/07/2009

    Hello John,

    you may have seen it already, but InkTip Scripts Wanted 463 - Company B is after a script that sounds like Imaginary Friends - I'd have a look at it.

    Chanel
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/31/2009

    Congrats! on the SOM nom. It's a good thing. It's not all about winning. At least that's what I tell myself.

    Good Job!
    Chris Keaton
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