JSteedla 

member since 03/06/2006 | last login 07/09/2012

I just put a short that I wrote called YOU'RE FIRED up on Funny Or Die. It stars Jill Bartlett (Comedy Central's "American Body Shop") and Josh Braaten (of "Semi-Pro"). I'd love it if you take a look, and if you like...

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I just put a short that I wrote called YOU'RE FIRED up on Funny Or Die. It stars Jill Bartlett (Comedy Central's "American Body Shop") and Josh Braaten (of "Semi-Pro"). I'd love it if you take a look, and if you like it, vote for it as "funny", and please please pass it on to all your friends! See it at: http://www.funnyordie.com/videos/f7fdce5e16/youre-fired-from-jstancari Thanks!

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  • A review of SAVAGES
    by JSteedla on 07/09/2009
    Savages: Notes by page: 1) Do not number page 1 1) Do not number your scenes, that's for a shooting script only. 1) Should be 2 spaces after FADE IN: 1) careful of multiple characters whose names start with the same letter, like Clara and Carmen (both C's) as this can confuse the reader as they scan the dialogue. 1) careful of dropped commas, as there's a lot of them... read
  • A review of Senseless! (rev.)
    by JSteedla on 02/02/2009
    Senseless: Notes by page #: 1: should be two spaces after FADE IN: and before the first slugline 1: slugline is missing the DAY/NIGHT time element from the first slugline. 1: the actor's lines should be (V.O.) since they are not in the theater and are heard via the movie speakers. 1: maybe slug the MAN and WOMAN as ACTOR and ACTRESS? Also, they should be properly intro's... read
  • A review of Speakeasy
    by JSteedla on 01/31/2009
    Speakeasy: Misc. Notes: - How old is Susan? How old is Cliff? And Hurley? Missing age info on these characters and some others. - Careful of multiple names that start with the same letter, like Susan and Sheryl, and then Skip, as this can confuse readers as they scan the character slugs. - might want to write using master scenes, like inside the tavern when we move to the... read
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Comments About JSteedla 22

  • kepow on 03/02/2010

    Hey dude, there's another one of these going on:

    http://bulletin.triggerstreet.com/viewtopic.php?t=50992&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0

    Let me know if you're planning to attend!
  • Chanel Ashley on 12/07/2009

    Hello John,

    you may have seen it already, but InkTip Scripts Wanted 463 - Company B is after a script that sounds like Imaginary Friends - I'd have a look at it.

    Chanel
  • **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 08/31/2009

    Congrats! on the SOM nom. It's a good thing. It's not all about winning. At least that's what I tell myself.

    Good Job!
    Chris Keaton
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