JuliusGorys 

member since 02/27/2003 | last login 04/12/2006

Urban planner by day. Traveled extensively; keen interest in politics, comedy, history and old Bugs Bunny cartoons. Have children who do background acting. Fine tuned my craft taking acting/screenplay workshops from the Canadian Film Development Centre and Robert McKee's workshop. Former scout...

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Urban planner by day. Traveled extensively; keen interest in politics, comedy, history and old Bugs Bunny cartoons. Have children who do background acting. Fine tuned my craft taking acting/screenplay workshops from the Canadian Film Development Centre and Robert McKee's workshop. Former scout leader and soccer coach.

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Reviews by JuliusGorys 18

  • A review of Speak the Word
    by JuliusGorys on 05/05/2005
    Decent story, believable dialogue, competently told with a satisfactory outcome. I've always been interested in the plight of the underdog and the correction of injustices. The trouble with semi or biographical tales though is that they lack sufficient tension and build up. This yarn is no different. There are elements of pure drama, but their outcomes are predictable. There... read
  • by JuliusGorys on 04/08/2005
    Brilliant, smashing, fast moving but well paced; a breeze to read. Smart dialogue, witty. Memorable characters. Great plot. Wouldn't change a thing (well actually, don't need the intro/cab driver if you need to tighten it and too many slaps at the end. Have her apply her newfound understanding of hockey). Suitably structured.
  • A review of 21
    by JuliusGorys on 09/14/2003
    I liked the premise but was put off by the structure of the screenplay. Too much direction preceeded the dialogue. In spite of considerable action, it came across as being wooden, with too many talking heads. Removing that tie in to dialogue will make it a much more enjoyable read. Another problem was that the characters were so stereotypical and did not have a lot of depth... read
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