The opening scene sets the tone of a drama film but soon commences to a tone of mystery, crime (gangster) and action... more
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I'm in my third year at Buckingham New University, studying Film and Tv Production....
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I'm in my third year at Buckingham New University, studying Film and Tv Production.
Reviews by Jumoke 8
A review of The Tragedy of Stan Dobbsby Jumoke on 04/18/2011The layout of the script is excellent and makes it easy to follow along. Although from the beginning of the script it doesn’t feel like a crime piece but I can understand by the way how it is written that you want the audience to understand the characters a bit more. This is good but maybe the pace of the script should be a bit faster. The characterisation of the characters... read
A review of Luck's Ran Outby Jumoke on 04/18/2011The layout and format of the script is excellent and makes it easy to follow along. From the start it is made clear the period this script is set in and the dialogue reflects this also. It is also clear to the audience when the script is set in the present era. The script feels professionally written in regards to the characterisation, action and the dialogue. The action has... read
A review of Time-Rift (v2)by Jumoke on 04/16/2011The layout and format of the script is good and makes it easy to follow along. I am not a real sci-fi fan and I thought this wouldn’t interest me but with a beginning like yours I just had to read on. In the action the only thing that should be in capital letters is the characters names. The action has enough description for the audience to visualise the scenes which is very... read