An illegal immigrant worker fights to unmask a right-wing terrorist group that recruited his brother as a suicide... more
My name is Jorge and I'm a technologist at times. I currently work for an internet startup and started writing in 2004. I live in Brooklyn, NY with my wife Betty and my dog Mac. I have a blog at http://jungleg.com...
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My name is Jorge and I'm a technologist at times. I currently work for an internet startup and started writing in 2004. I live in Brooklyn, NY with my wife Betty and my dog Mac. I have a blog at http://jungleg.com
Reviews by jungleg 8
A review of IN LOVE AND WAR (rev 2)by jungleg on 10/22/2007"In Love and War" is a well written story with an original concept. I looked up if such an event existed, and to my delight, it did, which would make the screenplay "based on a true story". The characters are well defined and the plot moves in an efficient manner, which at times make it a little hectic -- so I'd love to see a couple of additional scenes that relax the tension... read
A review of The Shoe Treeby jungleg on 09/08/2007"The Shoe Tree" is a very original story that balances humor with drama in an easy to read screenplay. I felt that the characters were real and were three dimensional, the dialogues feel real and the story, which could easily fall into a soap opera, rings authentic. The ending is satisfying, although not completely unexpected (thanks to the advance on page 46). There's also... read
A review of SIDEWALK STORYby jungleg on 09/24/2003It's hard to define why I liked your script, because it doesn't have the "classical" three act structure, or a well defined character arc, but I think that it's something you can relate to because you're telling this story from the bottom of your heart. I enjoyed that the story is always on the move, although a couple more "relaxing" scenes would be welcome here and there... read