jungleg

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My name is Jorge and I'm a technologist at times. I currently work for an internet startup and started writing in 2004. I live in Brooklyn, NY with my wife Betty and my dog Mac. I have a blog at http://jungleg.com

Submissions by jungleg

American Mask

a screenplay by jungleg

Genres: action, crime, foreign

An illegal immigrant worker fights to unmask a right-wing terrorist group that recruited his brother as a suicide... more

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Reviews by jungleg 8

A great historical drama

A review of IN LOVE AND WAR (rev 2)

by jungleg on 10/22/2007

"In Love and War" is a well written story with an original concept. I looked up if such an event existed, and to my delight, it did, which would make the screenplay "based on a true story". The characters are well defined and the plot moves in an efficient manner, which at times make it a little hectic -- so I'd love to see a couple of additional scenes that relax the tension... read
Interesting character-based story

A review of The Shoe Tree

by jungleg on 09/08/2007

"The Shoe Tree" is a very original story that balances humor with drama in an easy to read screenplay. I felt that the characters were real and were three dimensional, the dialogues feel real and the story, which could easily fall into a soap opera, rings authentic. The ending is satisfying, although not completely unexpected (thanks to the advance on page 46). There's also... read
Great Story

A review of SIDEWALK STORY

by jungleg on 09/24/2003

It's hard to define why I liked your script, because it doesn't have the "classical" three act structure, or a well defined character arc, but I think that it's something you can relate to because you're telling this story from the bottom of your heart. I enjoyed that the story is always on the move, although a couple more "relaxing" scenes would be welcome here and there... read

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Submissions by jungleg

American Mask

a screenplay by jungleg

Genres: action, crime, foreign

An illegal immigrant worker fights to unmask a right-wing terrorist group that recruited his brother as a suicide... more

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Reviews by jungleg 8

A great historical drama

A review of IN LOVE AND WAR (rev 2)

by jungleg on 10/22/2007

"In Love and War" is a well written story with an original concept. I looked up if such an event existed, and to my delight, it did, which would make the screenplay "based on a true story". The characters are well defined and the plot moves in an efficient manner, which at times make it a little hectic -- so I'd love to see a couple of additional scenes that relax the tension... read
Interesting character-based story

A review of The Shoe Tree

by jungleg on 09/08/2007

"The Shoe Tree" is a very original story that balances humor with drama in an easy to read screenplay. I felt that the characters were real and were three dimensional, the dialogues feel real and the story, which could easily fall into a soap opera, rings authentic. The ending is satisfying, although not completely unexpected (thanks to the advance on page 46). There's also... read
Great Story

A review of SIDEWALK STORY

by jungleg on 09/24/2003

It's hard to define why I liked your script, because it doesn't have the "classical" three act structure, or a well defined character arc, but I think that it's something you can relate to because you're telling this story from the bottom of your heart. I enjoyed that the story is always on the move, although a couple more "relaxing" scenes would be welcome here and there... read
70's horror today

A review of The Harvester

by jungleg on 09/01/2003

I found the script to be well written, with a good pace, and engaging dialogue. Unfortunately the story is not very original, I felt this has type of story has been done over and over, and couldn't help feeling that I was reading a 1970's horror movie script. That being said, I did find the script entertaining, and it definitely shows that the writer has the capacity to make... read
Interesting Story

A review of Second Genesis

by jungleg on 07/23/2003

I really enjoyed Second Genesis as a Sci-Fi story, and its exploration of the most important question we have as humans: how did we get here?The story moves slow at first but then picks up pace, and was a real thrill to see the scientists meet actual Martians, and see the similarities between them and humans.There's a couple of things that I would change. First, the dream sequence... read

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