JohnnyCoffeen 

member since 05/30/2011 | last login 12/12/2014

Currently attending the David Lynch Film School, Johnny Coffeen's debut short film "Happy Medium" premiered in March 2011 at The Huntington and subsequently traveled to the Portland Art Museum. Happy Medium was commissioned as an introductory piece to artist John Frame and...

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Currently attending the David Lynch Film School, Johnny Coffeen's debut short film "Happy Medium" premiered in March 2011 at The Huntington and subsequently traveled to the Portland Art Museum. Happy Medium was commissioned as an introductory piece to artist John Frame and to capture Frame's transition from sculpture to stop-motion animation. He also edited Frame's first film "Three Fragments of a Lost Tale" as well as assisted with the animation. He was the Assistant Editor on critically acclaimed "Short Term 12", which won Best Film at the SXSW Film Festival and received an Independent Spirit Award for Best Editing. CONTACT: JohnnyCoffeen@gmail.com

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Reviews by JohnnyCoffeen 62

  • A review of The Void (1st draft)
    by JohnnyCoffeen on 08/18/2014
    Hey Russell, we’ve read each other scripts at this point. Your last script was very impressive and I LOVE this idea -- sounds like something I’ll like. I did see Enter The Void too by the way and loved it. I guess off the bat, if you’re using DMT in the film, consider just rethinking the name of this script. I also love some of the dark comedies you mentioned in your synopsis,... read
  • A review of JUNK
    by JohnnyCoffeen on 08/13/2014
    Running Notes (numbers from now on mean page numbers): 0. Title page has date typo -- also, maybe the ")" after England. 1. This opening section reminds me of the ending of 2001, one of my favorites! Starscape and Overexposed can just be one word. How do we know he has motion sickness -- show don't tell. Maybe say: MARSHALL, a computerized voice, speaks before you have... read
  • by JohnnyCoffeen on 08/13/2014
    Running Notes (number from now on means page number): 0. Title Page: No need for this” This screenplay can not be used or reproduced without written consent from the author.” 1. Does chest area mean breasts? Clever use of the hearts. Consider using contractions like: “My name’s Owen. Everything’s gonna be OK. I promise.” 2. I really hope this nightmare is foreshadowing,... read
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  • philip halmarack on 08/22/2014

    Congratulations you too.
    I'm working hard on the 2nd draft of the screenplay.
    There was concern about the title. It's proving quite difficult.
    I think I'll change it to 'After The Fall'.
    Looking forward to your re write.
    Philip
  • xzilez on 08/13/2014

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