Kathie Pretzel 

member since 04/11/2009 | last login 12/30/2010

I am a law student with a desire to explore more of my creative side. Short stories and screenplays certainly are more difficult than legal briefs!...

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I am a law student with a desire to explore more of my creative side. Short stories and screenplays certainly are more difficult than legal briefs!

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Reviews by Kathie Pretzel 8

  • by Kathie Pretzel on 06/21/2009
    What was left unsaid in The Secrets We Donít Say was just as interesting to me as what was said in your story. I found it very interesting that the story was told from the perspective of someone who was not described, named or even expressly stated as male or female. I made the assumption that the person on the park bench was female until I was near the end of the story,... read

Comments About Kathie Pretzel 3

  • kmwriter on 04/29/2009

    Thanks for your kind review of "Fame" - I appreciate your encouraging words! --KM
  • pela-via on 04/26/2009

    Kathie- Thanks for your review of 'The Catalyst.' Your compliments were so encouraging. I doubt you would remember examples, but I wasn't sure which punctuation problems I needed to address. I'm a stickler for that, but I know there are rules I never learned. Thanks again! -pela-via
  • kmwriter on 04/13/2009

    Thanks for the "Birds" review -- it's always helpful to know what is or isn't clear. The "friend's situation" Sheila relates to Ray is Carol's, and it can even be inferred that Ray is the local dealer Terry tells Jason about, though I need to add a line to clarify that.

    I know it's ambiguous, but I think that's part of the challenge of short stories - to layer complexities in a very short piece of writing!

    Anyway, welcome to TS and I hope you enjoy your time here,

    -- KM

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