A murderer, a group of thieves and an innocent couple looking for life, are brought together by destiny.
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Reviews by kenbarber 14
A review of 13.45 (part 1)by kenbarber on 02/16/2012Hello Jenny. I'll be real candid with you regarding this story. It was boring. Now I understand there is more to it but had to be separated due to length. That doesn't make it more interesting, but rather less. Step back for a moment and take a closer look at this story. Would you read about a kid that stepped on another kid while playing football? Perhaps the other pieces... read
A review of Subsistenceby kenbarber on 02/07/2012Hello Reza. I think this piece could be adapted to the big screen. It pulled me in all the way the second time I read it. So many great situations you put Johnathan into and I thought your characters were perfect. On top of that, so many excellent phrases and descriptions such as, "Valley of Grief," "Their is no death there," "The gift of destiny,to beset salvation upon... read
A review of THE RAMBLINGS OF AN ODD MANby kenbarber on 02/01/2012Hello Jay. The story reminded me of Urban Cowboy with Dustin Hoffman playing the part of Rizzo. Maybe you are familiar with that movie or you are to young. The story line was ok but it seems to need more character development or something. In the beginning, Roger identified himself as being a tough guy, not caring about people's crap. Then he meets this stranger with a speech... read