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"Tales Of Cilla" sets the stage for an epic fiction piece about a young girl finding her way in the world.A review of Tales of Cillaby kenbarber on 11/03/2013If these writings were actually found in the way you describe, I think you are fortunate. My first thought was to use the writings to set the stage for a fiction piece about a young girl finding her way into adulthood thru trial and error in numerous sexual exploitations. I believe this could go in many different ways whether it be comedy or dramatic. The beauty is that the... read
A review of 13.45 (part 1)by kenbarber on 02/16/2012Hello Jenny. I'll be real candid with you regarding this story. It was boring. Now I understand there is more to it but had to be separated due to length. That doesn't make it more interesting, but rather less. Step back for a moment and take a closer look at this story. Would you read about a kid that stepped on another kid while playing football? Perhaps the other pieces... read
A review of THE RAMBLINGS OF AN ODD MANby kenbarber on 02/01/2012Hello Jay. The story reminded me of Urban Cowboy with Dustin Hoffman playing the part of Rizzo. Maybe you are familiar with that movie or you are to young. The story line was ok but it seems to need more character development or something. In the beginning, Roger identified himself as being a tough guy, not caring about people's crap. Then he meets this stranger with a speech... read