"You don’t write because you want to say something; you write because you’ve got something to say."

- F. Scott Fitzgerald


  • A review of Beach House
    by bengutteridge on 07/14/2014
    I know a lot of people like these kind of ironic films but personally they leave me cold. I'm sure the people that made it had a lot of fun making it and it is kind of fun to watch i guess but really while It's meant to be ironically bad - for me it really just seems bad.. I'm sure these guys could come up with something more original if they tried.
  • A review of Clean Before Loading
    by Studio2grl on 07/14/2014
    "Clean before Loading" is a cute idea. Shorts need to be really funny, insightful, or just sort of clever. I'd say you covered the last two pretty well. I love the set up with your male protagonist alone in the laundry mat. Some nice shots and we all get that the couple in the corner make him uncomfortable. It was a nice touch to bring them back at the end for the bookend... read
  • A review of Any Legacy
    by Studio2grl on 07/13/2014
    Interesting concept of an old man's lonely last days told through vignettes and flashbacks with voice over. It feels like an experimental short. I think the strong POV shots and inserts work to make it a richer piece. However, it doesn't quite cut together as cohesively as it could. A lot of shots linger too long and with the narrative it just feels a bit slow and unmotivated... read
  • A review of Awks
    by Studio2grl on 07/11/2014
    Awks by Tombola Pictures is a comedy about that awkward moment when you mistake a phone conversation to be directed at you. I like the simplicity of the shots and the dual screens. You've taken a short bit and made it into something more, but it feels a little incomplete. This would be hilarious in a movie or sketch and maybe could work in a series where multiple locations... read
  • A review of The Carved Pumpkin
    by Studio2grl on 07/11/2014
    This is my very first review on the site, so I'm not 100% sure what kind of feedback you need. I love these type of art films. At first I thought it was motion stop animation, but by the end it seemed more like a video where the frame rate was dropped, either way it has a lot of potential for an interesting visual display. The sound effects weren't bad, but by the end, I... read
  • by mchhokar on 07/11/2014
    Great choice of background music and camera work! I was engaged right from the beginning. It feels like a lot of work has been put into camera angels and editing and which is good! Well thought out plot. I was little confused watching first time and so watched again. I think the script is great but execution could be improved reducing a bit of confusion (shouldn't be confused... read
  • A review of Sunset
    by EugyBizzaro on 07/10/2014
    The is a jem of a film. It is a quaint little black and white film with all the simple but wonderful qualities of the old silent films. The acting is wonderful. The set and costumes are good. The crew did an excellent job. No one died. It's a cute little romance and would fall into that area of film I call... a Chick Flick. It has that sappy ahhhhhhhhh, which is perfect for... read
  • A review of Still Falls the Rain
    by EugyBizzaro on 07/10/2014
    I always say give me a good solid story and one actor that can at on a stage and I am a very happy camper. Well, this film has a story with allot of heart. The acting is seamless thanks to Ben Walker, Clive Willhand-Hill and Jeffrey Lipman SNK. The film has good effects, costumes and sets. The music is like icing on a cake. The crew did a great job!! This short moving film... read
  • A review of The Hunt
    by Michael Hudon on 07/08/2014
    I am puzzled to why this SHORT film fell so short of any sort of plot. I wish them all the luck in the world on their next project. The camera work was ok - so write, write, write, and then re-write. Without a plot and a resolution - the story will never be well received.
  • A review of CONVICTION
    by max sappa on 07/08/2014
    I love the acting of both actors. Absolutely loved what they did!!! Camera work? Fantastic camera work and editing! Music? Very nice indeed... The big let down is the story though. Unfortunately in this time and age is trite and kind of predictable - and it is almost trendy these days being an atheist. It is a pity because the first half of the movie had me really engaged... read
  • A review of Trap Door Action
    by max sappa on 07/08/2014
    This was posted by mistake right? It's a promotional video sale (that doesn't sell anything)! I was expecting to see 'Trap Door Action' in a corporate amateur fashion website - and I am generous. Maybe on some specialist channel at 4am... Why is this even called documentary? Why is it posted to Trigger Street? Can you actually edit footage of a couple of 'models' dressing... read
  • by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    It was a nice try to point the problems with Christmas. Jesus and Santa complain about the lack of spirit during Christmas but you portray them as allies rather than opponents. Jesus demonstrates:Spirit, Love, Mind, Principal, Truth, Soul and Life. Jesus lived a selfless life willing to be crucified to help others. Santa demonstrates the opposite qualities. He is lie... read
  • A review of Sunset
    by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    I enjoyed your film. It was a sweet, innocent film, which was enjoyable to watch. It was better than most short films that I've seen on Triggerstreet.com. The lead male looked sweet and innocent guy who wouldn't hurt a fly. I found myself wanting him to get the girl. The female lead did a great job too. She portrayed herself as a kind and gentile person who would be good... read
  • by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    Chevrolet never had a better commercial. I wish you did more commercials instead of the dull crude they usually put on television. Everything in your short was creative, funny and witty. I don't really have anything bad to say about your film. Maybe add what features does the Chevy have that is better than the Ford. Guys don't necessarily like a car just because it looks... read
  • by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    I don't really consider this a short film. This is more of a rant about what you like and don't like. I didn't see the connection between Lincoln and the Civil War and how a southern soldier running from a battle to Teddy Roosevelt and his Rough Riders pushing their horses overboard and the horses becoming disoriented and swimming to the open sea to men trying to escape Lincoln's... read
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