"You don’t write because you want to say something; you write because you’ve got something to say."

- F. Scott Fitzgerald


  • A review of Shelter by the Sea
    by paulcorey on 06/23/2014
    Hi, First off, I really enjoyed your short. The subject matter was interesting and the narrating poet was superb. My main criticisms are with the imagery used. I found the cutting to be too much. Longer takes create more of a sense of reality - I think the homeless guy's situation needed to be grounded more in reality. The images felt repetitive, but maybe that's what you... read
  • A review of Under the Bridge
    by MadAng on 06/23/2014
    I was unable to watch the video, not to sure why. I have all the plug-ins needed to watch it, I never had a problem watching anything else. It sounded interesting, kind of really wanted to watch it. I Might have to try again in the future. Sorry best of luck.
  • by Smythee on 06/24/2014
    This is protest film, centered around the BP gulf oil disaster. It starts with news footage. Sadly the footage goes on for so long that soon I wondered if it was a documentary. Overall the setup could have been delivered to the audience in a fraction of the screen time. The story dives into the consequences of a 'rush on water' at the local store. The biggest problem is... read
  • by curtdarwin on 06/24/2014
    You did a very good job on your short. Most shorts that I've seen are usually terrible but I enjoyed a Little Bag of Happiness very much. I don't have anything bad to say about it. I will say some minor criticism so this won't be a total love feast. When Abbey is nearly hit by Nicole, Abbey just opens the car door and gets in. There is no yelling at each other or asking... read
  • A review of REDtest
    by curtdarwin on 06/26/2014
    Really, you had three girls just stare at one another and you thought it would be terrifying? There was nothing to your short. What was your premise? There was no Act 2. You just had a girl run down some stairs for Act 1 see herself sitting on a couple of couches and then run up the stairs. And that was it. Good luck to you in the future.
  • by curtdarwin on 06/26/2014
    I was expecting a short film and received a music video and I was glad I did. Under the Montauk Moon is the kind of music I like and look forward to seeing your other work on Youtube. I have a minor suggestion and that is maybe show the effect the end of the season has on the people, do they need government handouts, how does the community help each other out in tough times... read
  • by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    I don't really consider this a short film. This is more of a rant about what you like and don't like. I didn't see the connection between Lincoln and the Civil War and how a southern soldier running from a battle to Teddy Roosevelt and his Rough Riders pushing their horses overboard and the horses becoming disoriented and swimming to the open sea to men trying to escape Lincoln's... read
  • by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    Chevrolet never had a better commercial. I wish you did more commercials instead of the dull crude they usually put on television. Everything in your short was creative, funny and witty. I don't really have anything bad to say about your film. Maybe add what features does the Chevy have that is better than the Ford. Guys don't necessarily like a car just because it looks... read
  • A review of Sunset
    by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    I enjoyed your film. It was a sweet, innocent film, which was enjoyable to watch. It was better than most short films that I've seen on Triggerstreet.com. The lead male looked sweet and innocent guy who wouldn't hurt a fly. I found myself wanting him to get the girl. The female lead did a great job too. She portrayed herself as a kind and gentile person who would be good... read
  • by curtdarwin on 07/05/2014
    It was a nice try to point the problems with Christmas. Jesus and Santa complain about the lack of spirit during Christmas but you portray them as allies rather than opponents. Jesus demonstrates:Spirit, Love, Mind, Principal, Truth, Soul and Life. Jesus lived a selfless life willing to be crucified to help others. Santa demonstrates the opposite qualities. He is lie... read
  • A review of Trap Door Action
    by max sappa on 07/08/2014
    This was posted by mistake right? It's a promotional video sale (that doesn't sell anything)! I was expecting to see 'Trap Door Action' in a corporate amateur fashion website - and I am generous. Maybe on some specialist channel at 4am... Why is this even called documentary? Why is it posted to Trigger Street? Can you actually edit footage of a couple of 'models' dressing... read
  • A review of CONVICTION
    by max sappa on 07/08/2014
    I love the acting of both actors. Absolutely loved what they did!!! Camera work? Fantastic camera work and editing! Music? Very nice indeed... The big let down is the story though. Unfortunately in this time and age is trite and kind of predictable - and it is almost trendy these days being an atheist. It is a pity because the first half of the movie had me really engaged... read
  • A review of The Hunt
    by Michael Hudon on 07/08/2014
    I am puzzled to why this SHORT film fell so short of any sort of plot. I wish them all the luck in the world on their next project. The camera work was ok - so write, write, write, and then re-write. Without a plot and a resolution - the story will never be well received.
  • A review of Still Falls the Rain
    by EugyBizzaro on 07/10/2014
    I always say give me a good solid story and one actor that can at on a stage and I am a very happy camper. Well, this film has a story with allot of heart. The acting is seamless thanks to Ben Walker, Clive Willhand-Hill and Jeffrey Lipman SNK. The film has good effects, costumes and sets. The music is like icing on a cake. The crew did a great job!! This short moving film... read
  • A review of Sunset
    by EugyBizzaro on 07/10/2014
    The is a jem of a film. It is a quaint little black and white film with all the simple but wonderful qualities of the old silent films. The acting is wonderful. The set and costumes are good. The crew did an excellent job. No one died. It's a cute little romance and would fall into that area of film I call... a Chick Flick. It has that sappy ahhhhhhhhh, which is perfect for... read
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