A display of nice paintings.
The paintings were very nice. The cricket sounds in one scene were extremely loud, almost sounded like a whistle. The voice over was too monotone for me and I didn’t quite understand the story you were trying to tell, if any. As to death day not being remembered (I believe you said that), in the U. S. the day someone died is usually remembered by the love ones left behind.
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A review of Reliefby ron gannon on 01/23/2014An interesting little read that kept my interest all the way. The shooting was a surprise. I liked it. I thought the writing was very good. It was easy to follow and I didn't have to go back and reread something (like I had to do in most of the short stories I read here). I don't have any suggestions on the story. I suggest you consider, "I stepped quickly out into the hallway... read
A review of The Prisoner with the Gold-Flecked Eyesby ron gannon on 12/14/2013At first the poor grammar was very distracting - especially at the beginning. It did get better except for punctuation, capitals, and just about anything a teacher would circle red. After a few pages I went back and started over again, trying to ignore the poor writing. To start with: 'So. Much. Blood.' isn't a sentence. And you started a new paragraph with the last part... read
A review of Eating Away At Meby ron gannon on 12/12/2013Original and fun. I liked it. I got a kick of him worrying about the carpet while being eaten alive. The writing is very good - very unusual here. I suggest describing her. I was confused by, "She tightens her white hot grip." Other than that no complaints and I can't think of any suggestions that would improve it. I also like how you gave the reasons why he was being... read