A display of nice paintings.
The paintings were very nice. The cricket sounds in one scene were extremely loud, almost sounded like a whistle. The voice over was too monotone for me and I didn’t quite understand the story you were trying to tell, if any. As to death day not being remembered (I believe you said that), in the U. S. the day someone died is usually remembered by the love ones left behind.
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A review of Noreen the Show Catby ron gannon on 11/28/2013Easy to follow and very enjoyable. Your visuals were excellent: her upside-down sleeping position, tumbling across the pavement in a Ferris wheel of feathers, Lil stopped in her tracks to act like she wasn’t following. To list a few of many. Excellent writing. Think about: Well, Lil, it's been a pleasure. Oh, Miss Noreen. Wow! Miss Noreen. Yeah, I'm hungry. Well, nice meeting... read
A review of Four girlsby ron gannon on 11/28/2013I'll review this as a short story, although it's a short script. You can post short scripts on Zoetrope.com. Killing 2 best friends over a guy? You Swedish girls are unforgiving. I take it Kate came up with the idea of killing them. I suggest showing the first murder. Then have the 2nd before they bury Maria. The quote "Yeah, I don't want to, get more dirt on my clothes"... read
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