Review of: End Over End (rev.) 

reviewed by thomasdolan on 11/05/2003
Credited Review
thomasdolan
A Nice "Varsity Blues" esque sceenplay Credited Review
As I read this screenplay I became enthralled in it. I too have witnessed friends kill themselves in front of me and I just have to say you definitely got the jist of emotions running through Kevin. I was very pleased how the story flowed. This is a magnificent screenplay and you are a very talented writer. There were a few mistypes in the screenplay but very few which editing will catch once this story sells. Good luck on your endeavors, this one is good.

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