Fitzroy Square looks pretty cool with it's black and white tone, but doesn't deliver much else in my opinion. I've never been a fan of using music over dialogue fully and it didn't work again in this short. Room tone and the subtitles would have worked, especially since the majority of the film is subtitled. Now to the subtitles, not the best execution of them, sometimes they went a bit fast in the dialogue between the men in the film, and weren't correct in grammar sometimes, which I realize is nitpicking.
The full black screen with low dialogue in the middle of the film was confusing as I was unaware what was going on, I mean, I can guess, but it might be better to depict on screen who's talking whether by words or video.
The end death was unbelievable from the actor standpoint, just not played well, came off funny more then ominous.
Again, I give credit for the cool black and white video, but thumbs down for the rest. Keep moving forward though and making more work. All the best.
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