I loved this story.
The descriptions were fantastic. I felt like I was actually in the room as an observer, along with the main character. Having very little dialogue truly worked for "The Ring." And what dialogue there was didn't detract from the story; it helped it along.
My only recommendations would be to clean up the grammar and change the title since it "rings" to close to a certain horror movie. Perhaps "The Wedding Ring?"
Thanks for the read. It was truly inspiring and heartfelt.
Review of: The Ring
reviewed by eaklee on 08/31/2007
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