Review of: Father Max Rev. 2 

reviewed by alexseaborne on 12/27/2006
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alexseaborne
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I thought that this was written beautifully. I am big on events that happened in history like the holocaust and I really enjoyed the fact that this was about the other individuals that lost their lives not to take away from any one elses struggles but this really touched me.I thought the structure was well thought out and that the story developed and unfolded well, for a moment Ithought he was going to find some way to get out and avoid death, but I thought you did this well in pulling my heart string. I don't have any thing negative to say I would definetly love to see this on screen. I hope you find success with this and any of your other screenplays you've made a fan. I hope to read more in the future. Best wishes and Happy new year.

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