I do have to say it's pretty nice work for onlly having 24 hrs to complete this. Thats an accomplishment in itself.
I like how you put in the line and action in this film. Cleverly done with the nerd that just spews out movies lines...usually these things seem forced in these type of films where you have requirements. Those two elements didn't...the nerd on the other hand did. It just seemed very like "oh there's the nerd!" to me.
I did like the ending montage and the voice over with it is very powerful, but the accident kind of hinders the effect of it. I know how difficult it is to create a car accident scene but I think if you tighten the editing a bit more you'll have it down.
Also I wasn't sold on your actors. They seemed robotic. I understand that it was probably difficult to get performance or even credible actors in such short time.
Other than that I enjoyed the story and it was shot pretty well! Good luck with future projects!!
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