Other Reviews by jacquesst 41

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  Nice
  A review of The Things We Pull From the Wreckage
  by jacquesst on 07/20/2010
  I enjoyed your story although it left me feeling somewhat sad. I enjoyed the tension between the protagonist and his wife and how the situation with the injured dog plays on their relationship and emotions. This piece is well written and I loved how you described the action taking place. I would recommend this story to anybody. Congratulations on a great short story. Hope to... I enjoyed your story although it left me feeling somewhat sad. I enjoyed the tension between the protagonist and his wife and how the situation with the injured dog plays on their relationship and emotions. This piece is well written and I loved how you described the action taking place. I would recommend this story to anybody. Congratulations on a great short story. Hope to read more of your work in the future.
  
  Regards
  
  Jacques read
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  The Testing
  A review of THE TESTING
  by jacquesst on 12/09/2008
  I found this story very interesting and loved the ending. That said it needs work and is still a bit rough around the edges. I noted that various sentences were in the wrong tense, something small that leads to your reader losing focus. Who is the kid? What is his name? Overall it wasn’t a bad read and I hope that you can work on it again, which will make it so much better... I found this story very interesting and loved the ending. That said it needs work and is still a bit rough around the edges. I noted that various sentences were in the wrong tense, something small that leads to your reader losing focus. Who is the kid? What is his name? Overall it wasn’t a bad read and I hope that you can work on it again, which will make it so much better. Keep on writing and merry xmas!
  Jacques read
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  Body Parts
  A review of Body Parts
  by jacquesst on 08/19/2008
  Kevin I reckon they should create a new section where the person with the most short story uploads should be mentioned. That or I should get paid just to review your stories...Just kidding! Body Parts was very interesting. It was short and sweet. I would’ve preferred a longer story with more detail and descriptions. There is lots of room in this tale that can make for a better... Kevin I reckon they should create a new section where the person with the most short story uploads should be mentioned. That or I should get paid just to review your stories...Just kidding!
  Body Parts was very interesting. It was short and sweet. I would’ve preferred a longer story with more detail and descriptions. There is lots of room in this tale that can make for a better story, but its good as is. One thing I do admire about your stories is the twists. I don’t always see them coming which makes them fun to read. I don’t have any criticism apart from what I already mentioned. Keep up the good writing.
  Cheers read