Other Reviews by pez999@mac.com 18

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  An Irresistible Screenplay
  A review of An Irresistible Force
  by pez999@mac.com on 02/28/2013
  (This review contains spoiler alerts!) I like this screenplay. The characters were real although Haley was a little on the annoying/tease side ( at least for my tastes). Paul was very well done. I like the fact he lost interest in life after his wife died and became a pain in the ass at work, but at the same time was in therapy. This shows he was/is aware of his condition... (This review contains spoiler alerts!)
  I like this screenplay. The characters were real although Haley was a little on the annoying/tease side ( at least for my tastes). Paul was very well done. I like the fact he lost interest in life after his wife died and became a pain in the ass at work, but at the same time was in therapy. This shows he was/is aware of his condition and is at least trying to change, especially after he met Haley.
  
  I would have like to see a little more of Stephanie in his life and see more of their relationship. The story was not predictable to me, I really thought Paul and Haley would get together at the end. If this was the formulaic story, they would have been together. The whole dinner with Claire was a surprise and a rather mean (obviously unintentionally) trick to pull on Paul.
  
  Overall a good read and fun. read
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  Goblin Market: an Interesting mix of Ideas
  A review of Goblin Market
  by pez999@mac.com on 01/01/2013
  While I did think the screenplay was a good read I was a little confused where it was going. I'm not sure if it's a love story, a story of magic and/or a horror story. I seemed a little combination of all three. Not necessarily a bad thing, but I think it's trying to be too many things at once. It was well written structurally but there were some spelling errors. Not really... While I did think the screenplay was a good read I was a little confused where it was going. I'm not sure if it's a love story, a story of magic and/or a horror story. I seemed a little combination of all three. Not necessarily a bad thing, but I think it's trying to be too many things at once.
  
  It was well written structurally but there were some spelling errors. Not really a big deal. Was confused, goblins are a normal part of this world? Nobody bats an eye over them. And then there was the party. I'm a little confused there too. If the fruit rots if taken away from the market how did the fruit Jimmy brought to the party stay fresh for everyone to eat?
  
  I was also a little unsure what the whole church full of corpses had to do with the story. It just seemed a little tacked on to me.
  
  Overall it was a good read. read
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  Zombies Galore
  A review of Rednecks Vs Space-Zombies revised
  by pez999@mac.com on 11/20/2012
  For the most part I liked this screenplay. It was well constructed in both form and structure. It was a little predictable in places and sort of followed the "Zombie Formula". I knew Jefferson would end up staying and be taking care of Tom and Mary. The whole Daisy relationship was a little predictable also. You practically gave it away when she talked about her long standing... For the most part I liked this screenplay. It was well constructed in both form and structure. It was a little predictable in places and sort of followed the "Zombie Formula". I knew Jefferson would end up staying and be taking care of Tom and Mary. The whole Daisy relationship was a little predictable also. You practically gave it away when she talked about her long standing crush.
  
  I could definitely have done without the narration. It was not needed and reminded me of a episode of The Dukes of Hazard. Beyond that it was fun and a good read. The dialogue was very good. You have that pegged and have a talent for it. read