I wasn't sure what I was expecting, but I actually quite enjoyed this. I think this was done really well.
I think It was a great shame that they didn't let you enter the starwars comp.
Just a minor complaint is the size of the screen and the enocoding that didn't help and made it hard to see.
But really well done on all accounts and thanks for uploading!
Other Reviews by timhan 368
A review of The Doll (2nd Draft)by timhan on 11/14/2008This short story wasn't half bad. I think it has a lot of potential, but I did feel it was a bit too short. I also think for a horror story it could have done with a bit more gore perhaps, what about hearing the screams of the mother, etc.? I also felt that the daughter going back to bed wasn't really very realistic. I think I would have preferred the daughter to tell her... read
A review of Webcamby timhan on 03/19/2008Well done on making another short. I wasn't sure what to make of this at first. It didn't feel too much like a comedy, although the facebook line made me chuckle a bit. I think it was just played too straight, and that made the bit where he kills the guy feel a little odd. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to upload.
A review of 3by timhan on 03/19/2008The shots on the sofa were way too static and the acting needed work. Also, the music didn't fit the piece too well. Finally the script on the whole was way too predictable and I think you should of got someone else to read it and give you feedback. Hmm, that doesn't too positive so sorry for the negative comments.