Review of: Tea Break 

reviewed by elcappy on 10/28/2003
elcappy
Cool conceptual comedy
Nice littler short, I loved the abstract concept over a simple thing, it looks very good but the lighting needs to help drive the story, the sound does this very good. I think the fact that they were twins needs to be exposed better; this will make the story tighter, good comedy acting, specially the guy. The tea scene is a bit long, and some of the static high angled shots gives it a bit of a stiff look. But overall Great job!

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