Review of: What's Wrong with This Picture? 

reviewed by ptsmartin on 01/05/2003
ptsmartin
Crazy kid
I love watching young children act and Aidan was great. The stickman was genius and having him make the kid cry was priceless. I enjoyed the very simple animation mixed in with real life surroundings. Very clever and nicely executed. Great work with a limited budget.

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  • by ptsmartin on 01/05/2003
    Everyone has seen their friends try to act out tv shows and this short is a good example of that. There are just so many characters, I coudn't remember anyone's name at the end of the story except Fisher Davis. Also, I enjoyed the music, but it was hard to hear the dialogue over it. I really liked the idea behind the story but did not find it humerous at all.
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