Review of: Sam, Roscoe & Her 

reviewed by eaklee on 09/12/2007
Credited Review
Creepy! Credited Review
"Sam, Roscoe, and Her" was a fantastic concept and story. It was well-written and had great character development. The best thing about it was that when I finished, I didn't realize how much I had read so quickly and the ending made me want more! Now that's the sign of a good writer/story-teller.

The story started off with an interesting (and unique) background into Sam's personality/upbringing, and continued with a great sense of character development throughout. The author made me really love this character and want to follow him through his day, as humdrum as it might appear to an outsider.

The descriptions throughout were well-planned and very captivating, beginning with Sam making coffee in the morning. We learned an immense amount about Sam just in his brewing of coffee one morning.

Lastly, I loved the tenseness throughout the story. There was always a sense of foreboding that kept pulling me quickly through it.

A fantastic piece of work! I'd love to see a much longer work of fiction incorporating the characters and this story!

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