Sorry to say, and I do appreciate your detailed synopsis, but I was unable to figure out just what this entire short (storywise) was supposed to be about. I think there were three different things going on.. but I'm not quite sure.
Camerawork - very nice. I did like the chromakey and it suited the dream sequence well. The edits looked nice.
Audio - creepy music. Audio sounded okay.
All in all, I'm not really sure what to say. The short did not completely grab my attention, which could be part of the reason I had trouble understanding it. Oh well... regardless, best of luck.
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