There was a beginning middle and end and a consequence for one's actions in this story. The lighting and focus was not what I am used to seeing as a finished short film submission. The sound quality was clear but acting seemed like people who are trying their best at being actors for the first time: friends who are doing a favor. Clever positioning of the idea of addiction to a game, though.
Keep at it.
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