Well... Yeah... I'm sorry but what in the world was this? It started off great but went into something I can't even explain.
1. Camera work was nice, colors were very good, very pleasing to the eye.
2. The sounds were amazing, usually shorts don't the time to consider sound/audio.
1. Story, I really just didn't get it. It became demonic in some areas it seemed, when I have no idea how that would tie into a story about people being tied to certain things, which also didn't make sense to me.
Remember these are just my opinion so take them with a grain of salt. Good luck.
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