Just because a man wears a suit doesn't mean he's trying to destroy peace.
The acting was okay, but the action was cheesy. That kick was horrible, I thought I was watching a bad action flick. And the big long chase scene did nothing for me.
Dialogue would have helped this piece in a lot more ways than showing us a badly painted peace symbol at the end.
This short is just not up to par with most others I've seen. I will say at least you were trying to convey a story unlike other pieces where there's just beautiful shots and no story foundation.
- D.J. Buchanan
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A review of The Carved Pumpkinby DJBFilmz on 08/31/2012I liked this short. When a film makes me wonder how you got some of the shots then it's defin a plus for me. Also very creative I thought and a bit weird in a good way. Also like your use of sound, it was very pro. There's not much negative I have beside quality but that could just be because of the web. Good work! - David
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