This short shows how much humor can be derived from the simplest of setups and sets. The opening gag with the pile of boxes and parts got a laugh that grew with the instructions in every language but english. I also thought the welding visor POV was a nice touch and showed some production value not usually seen in shorts of this size and budget. From what I gathered in the production notes you guys are shooting alot of sketch comedy like this. It's good work, keep it up.
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A review of Theft is Propertyby Dodgeball on 06/16/2005This script has some nice things going for it. I love the style and attitude of Colin's VO and the multiple, fast-paced storylines that all intertwine. It's remniscent a bit of "Lock Stock and two smoking barrels" and "Trainspotting" and "Confidence." I liked what happens to Fran too. So often in movies do we see someone shoot their gun in the air, so rarely are there consequences... read
A review of Children At Playby Dodgeball on 06/09/2005This is a great premise for a horror film. The logline is reall intriguing and for the most part, the script delivers on the horror. However, the author tells us way too much about the nature of the orphanage and the horror right off the bat. I think you would do well to lose the whole Act 1 Austin storytelling scene. I understand why you want it, but if it came later, like... read
A whimsical tale that would benefit from a revision that's shorter, better structured and more clear as to why/what/who Horatio is.A review of Horatioby Dodgeball on 06/09/2005"Horatio" has a universally appealing premise--mysterious stranger with magical powers has an extraordinary impact on the ordinary lives of a group of people. The magic man in this case is Horatio and he comes to a small town where a group of people are struggling with problems we can all relate to. The first 35 pages are pretty much wholly dedicated to establishing that... read