I really, really, really love your short story. Your story held my attention from start to finish. I didn't want it to end. The suspense. The mystery. Pull me in. The ending it surprise the heck out of me. Just wow.
Every last one of your character fit in the short story. I never ask myself why is that person in this story. Your characters had life and meaning. None of them were one-dimensional. Even the dialogue was superb.
Well done. Well done.
Review of: Malevolence
reviewed by dreamtowrite on 04/21/2011
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