I've sat here in front of the screen, staring at it for a long while, not sure of what to write.
This piece moved me and frustrated me at the same time. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. The idea of love, loss and dedication is a stirring sentiment, but I'm not sure that there is an actual story here. It is more of an homage to or a farewell to a man's dead wife and past life.
The entire film is in voice over, so it is all exposition. We are told of the death of his wife, the heartache it has caused, the struggle to go on and the desire he has to keep his promise and raise two fine young men, but what we see is a guy dressing himself and cooking breakfast, two things that everyone does every day of their adult life. I did not see the man's struggle at all. Some of the shots seemed to be there only because they were "interesting" or "unique" but they didn't seem to add to the story.
Other Reviews by Christopher Cordell 6
A review of Kaplan's Equationby Christopher Cordell on 11/20/2011I enjoyed this film. Silent films are very difficult. It is very hard to get your ideas across to the audience without the aid of dialogue. This story succeeds at being fun and entertaining. It is well shot and well crafted. It may have been better to have the cast not all wearing the same colour (blue) and to have Kaplan running with more urgency to the other professor. This... read
A review of The Riddle of Rudolf Hess - Second Draftby Christopher Cordell on 11/20/2011Writing a script is difficult. So it is safe to assume that the writer of this script has worked very hard. Yet this script is plagued with issues, from numerous spelling mistakes, improper grammar and a total lack of plot. I often confuse "there" with "their" when I write. The author of this story has done it numerous times and it hurts the integrity of his story as it makes... read
A review of How to be a Girlby Christopher Cordell on 11/19/2011This film looks like it was put together as a fun thing for the family to do one long weekend. It is a great exercise in how to shoot and edit your own small story and it looks like the people involved are genuinely having a good time working on the piece. And although the script is poorly developed, the story uneventful, the scenes not very well directed, the acting is painful... read