Review of: The Rising 

reviewed by pez999@mac.com on 10/19/2011
Credited Review
pez999@mac.com
Generic but well done Credited Review
The main problem I have with the screenplay is the timing and predictability of it. Zombies have been done (excuse the pun) to death. While the movie was very predictable it was well constructed and I found the dialogue well above par. The characters could be related to however there seemed to be too many flashbacks for my personal taste.

In general I liked the screenplay. This was particularly good effort and, as I said before, I was very impressed with the dialogue. It seems that's one area where your talents lie. This does get an A for effort from me.

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