Other Reviews by SeaMowse 1192

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  Very ElmerLangish - but that's a good thing!
  A review of Under the Bridge
  by SeaMowse on 12/02/2007
  Yes... indeed it is, since I'm a fan of Mr. Lang's. This was a wonderful short. I loved the way you tied even trivial bits of information into your story. Bravo! Camerawork: - Well done. Your shots looked very composed and framed edited nicely. The stock footage used worked well and fit in smoothly with the other edits. Audio/Music - I enjoyed the background music.... Yes... indeed it is, since I'm a fan of Mr. Lang's. This was a wonderful short. I loved the way you tied even trivial bits of information into your story. Bravo!
  
  Camerawork: - Well done. Your shots looked very composed and framed edited nicely. The stock footage used worked well and fit in smoothly with the other edits.
  
  Audio/Music - I enjoyed the background music. I like the quality of your speaking voice, but I do believe it needs to be stronger or more consistent in volume. At times, I found myself having to strain a bit, to hear what you were narrarating. Regardless, I was able to fully appreciate the short.
  
  All in all - this is a great short that managed to capture facts and pieces of history in a unique way. You and Elmer need to meet and bring TriggerStreet to its feet. Best of luck! read
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  In the middle of a story?
  A review of Replaced
  by SeaMowse on 11/30/2007
  This short came off as being just a segment of a story. Somewhere in the middle, perhaps. I have no clue as to how the 'victim' ended up being kidnapped, and who his 'replacement' was (i read the credits). I'm sorry to say that doesn't appear to be a complete film, or maybe I'm just missing something? Anyways... on to the review. Camerawork: Nicely done. The colors were... This short came off as being just a segment of a story. Somewhere in the middle, perhaps. I have no clue as to how the 'victim' ended up being kidnapped, and who his 'replacement' was (i read the credits). I'm sorry to say that doesn't appear to be a complete film, or maybe I'm just missing something? Anyways... on to the review.
  
  Camerawork: Nicely done. The colors were crisp, and although at times the lighting seemed a bit too harsh and unrealistic, given the fact that our main character was in the process of of a torture/interrogation - well, the lighting worked well. Shots looked framed nicely. Editing was quick.
  
  Audio/Music: I enjoyed the suspense music!
  
  Acting: The acting was just okay for me. Seemed a bit rehearsed and forced.
  
  All in all, this short left me feeling unsatisfied. It was nicely filmed, but left me confused. read
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  Multiple choice endings
  A review of Colette's Last Bath
  by SeaMowse on 11/30/2007
  This short was very cleverly done. The twist at the ending was great, and really any of the scenarios could be easily applied. Camerawork: Very well done. Good framing and composition. I liked the way the edits, at the end, were well synchronized with the music. The edits between his listening to his voice mail, to what his girlfriend was doing, was well done. Audio/Music:... This short was very cleverly done. The twist at the ending was great, and really any of the scenarios could be easily applied.
  
  Camerawork: Very well done. Good framing and composition. I liked the way the edits, at the end, were well synchronized with the music. The edits between his listening to his voice mail, to what his girlfriend was doing, was well done.
  
  Audio/Music: Audio sounded good. The music fit in tightly with the edits and the scenes as they were taking place.
  
  Acting: The acting was very well done.
  
  All in all, I enjoyed seeing this short. The ending had a clever twist. Best of luck! read