Good script but looks like an amateur video
Well, the story itself was funny but the cheap production keepsthe result down. This is sad because this nice script deserves more than you did. The "actors" are just playing their roles.Thats what all beginners do and that seperates them from the realtalented actors. The light looked cheap and the warm yellow tonewas too strong. The opening shot was not a opener to the story.The camera angles were too average. Altogether it looks like a cheap amateur home movie and in the end it is.The only good thing is clear compressed picture. Well done.
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