Good stuff!
Well first of all - the credits were great! No really they were very good. The ending I didn't completely understand to be honest - just a thought if you were aiming for a not-necessarily-intelligent-adience - I don;t fully understand. I could tell there was going to be some sort of interseting climax - what I really hoped you would do is have the guy suddenly snap out of a bored trance of somesort sitting at his desk - the lights all around suddenly come up and he's sitting in an office filled with hundreds of people all typing madly away. Technically - I have no real experience in the area - but I thought it looked and felt great - great job on the lighting and composition of shots - loved the echoey sound also. As I said - Good Stuff! Keep at it George!
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Hey guys and girls, this is a truly wonderful piece of work you've got here. I loved the humour - the cuts when Carolin was trying to say something important cracked me right up - cutting to the interviews where they say how much they liked carolin - yet by the way you've shown it, they clearly don't care about what she has to say. The dialogue is what amazes me the most.....
Hey guys and girls, this is a truly wonderful piece of work you've got here. I loved the humour - the cuts when Carolin was trying to say something important cracked me right up - cutting to the interviews where they say how much they liked carolin - yet by the way you've shown it, they clearly don't care about what she has to say. The dialogue is what amazes me the most... Soooo well written, all of the films you've posted, Will, have such brilliant dialogue, it's what sets them apart from everything else. So well done on the writing Will, Doug and Sam! The cast was nothing short of perfect in my opinion - very well performed. The great thing is - I haven't said a thing about lighting, sound, music, or anything too technical... that's because it was so damn good I didn't even notice it was happening - exactly how it should be as you all know. The fact it was shot/filtered in black and white really intrigued me - it supports the whole story and its themes. The first time I watched it I was relieved at the end, finally something which had been creeping at the back of my mind came out, it made me laugh - hard! That was built up so well I congratulate Will, Doug and Kyle and indeed everyone who took part in making this wonderful short - thanks for the view!
Ah yes, and also while I'm here, thankyou for the review of "Norman" Natasha, very helpful. I have learnt so much from watching these films and really hope to now concentrate my efforts on the story and characters - I now realise their utmost importance. Thankyou :) See ya later, good luck on the next production.
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Em.. ok one thing I really didnt like about this film was the lack of realism. I mean the shooting - these guys were shooting at eachother with powerful hand guns from about 5 - 10 metres away, in a field of grass with no rocks. So i ask you how in hell they survived 100+ gunshots form that range - as I said, it must have been really sharp shooting huh? Another point - the...
Em.. ok one thing I really didnt like about this film was the lack of realism. I mean the shooting - these guys were shooting at eachother with powerful hand guns from about 5 - 10 metres away, in a field of grass with no rocks. So i ask you how in hell they survived 100+ gunshots form that range - as I said, it must have been really sharp shooting huh? Another point - the sounds of ricocheting bullets off of rocks... which were not present in most of the shots. The visuals of the gun shots (muzzle flashes) were not bad at all - well done there. A bit of blood would have been a nice touch but I suppose if you were goin for a western look rather than more modern then it worked. The characters were not appalingly inaccurate, but they were appauling. I just didn't feel for the guy at all when his friend got killed - I didn't give a damn, and that is what would have made the film - the emotion behind the action - the reason this guy is angry and sad and wants to KILL THE BASTARD who killed his friend. So if you had made this emotion, and made it strong then the film would really have been excellent. Good try, it must have been fun making this one. Sorry if I sounded a bit harsh there, but its just one guy's opinion.
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My goodness, finally something truly amazing. I think I could learn a lot from you and the whole production team. This short was... immaculate! I really enjoyed watching it, the acting was some of the best I've seen on triggerstreet, David and Marnye very effectivley convaued the emotions which really brought this film to light. The sound was lovely, the music - very well...
My goodness, finally something truly amazing. I think I could learn a lot from you and the whole production team. This short was... immaculate! I really enjoyed watching it, the acting was some of the best I've seen on triggerstreet, David and Marnye very effectivley convaued the emotions which really brought this film to light. The sound was lovely, the music - very well composed. Michael Field, you obviously have great talent and I can see you going very far in the industry. The split screen at the start and the first singal shot as the two meet for the first time really just worked perfectly here. Its is very refreshing to see such marvelous work on TS - the first I've seen in a while. Good luck to you and all of your production team and cast! Thankyou for the excellent view.
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