Nice job on your short film. It was pretty good. The acting could have been better, primarily from Larry and the woman. David was alright, and in fact he was very funny. I thought a lot of the lines were kind of corny.
However I did like the whole point with the fact that there were really actually no kids at all, and it was just what Larry wanted to see.
As far as originality goes, though, I find it kind of a typical story. I've seen it in film a hundred times.
I still enjoyed it though. It was funny, and made me laugh. Just work on the acting and the dialogue.
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