Review of: THE HIT 

reviewed by timhan on 10/21/2007
timhan
Great Acting

The short was paced quite well. The dialogue was very well put together, and the camera work was okay too.

I think overall it was a shame that there wasn't a little more thought put into the plot though, especially as the beginning with the two guys chatting was a very strong start. I was impressed straight away with the dialogue and acting, these guys seemed so natural, it was just a bit of let down then, with the ending.

Well, thanks for uploading, keep up the good work, but work more on the overall plot, cya!

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