Review of: Mixed Messages
reviewed by Gammon on 10/20/2010
Ha! Good twist.
I thought the shots were spot on. Good sound. Good movement in a static situation. Decent acting though I felt the actor was better than the actress. Since you're also the writer, I'm going to nitpick the beginning of your story. I realize there are budgetary constraints, but I immediately wondered why she would sit across from the guy when there seemed to be plenty of empty seats. It was a "wait a minute here" moment and then I got back into the story. Other than faulting you on that, I thought the rest of the film faultless. Good job.
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