Hilarious
Wow! That for a short film is extraordinary . It is a simple film, short off course, but very interesting. Ant Jam did a great job with this one, I really enjoyed it. I laugh a lot, and I think it is really fun to watch.
I Like the fact that the main character was well presented in the beginning of the film, even though the time was limited. I think the story was brilliant.
The only problem I have with this film is that the main character is way too dumb, and he should not have come talk to the lady with his short pants on.
I really like that film, and I think people should check it out.
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Like bloody lips is a nice short film, fill with information. The acting was alright, and the background music was perfect. I liked the fact that the producer through some pictures proper to what the actor was saying.
The story is interesting, and is revealing how someone getting hurt can become strange, and I may even say dangerous. The acting was not so bad, even though...
Like bloody lips is a nice short film, fill with information. The acting was alright, and the background music was perfect. I liked the fact that the producer through some pictures proper to what the actor was saying.
The story is interesting, and is revealing how someone getting hurt can become strange, and I may even say dangerous. The acting was not so bad, even though I think that it could have been more convincing.
However, I saw some flaws that I want to point out. The genre is said to be Action, Documentary, and Drama, yet the film seems to be funny. When I was watching it, I thought the genre to be comedy, but it seems that I was wrong. This is why I watched it several time to see, if I could think otherwise, and I could not.
This short film is good, but could be better, since the produce clearly have talent.
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Bravo, bravo. Brilliant script! I really enjoyed it. I think that the story is well written and it is very funny. It takes a lot to make me laugh, and this story got me going.
The writer is not a perfect being and this is why we encounters some weaknesses Within the script. However, It was still pleasant and nice to read.
My problem with the story is the fact that Tom’s character...
Bravo, bravo. Brilliant script! I really enjoyed it. I think that the story is well written and it is very funny. It takes a lot to make me laugh, and this story got me going.
The writer is not a perfect being and this is why we encounters some weaknesses Within the script. However, It was still pleasant and nice to read.
My problem with the story is the fact that Tom’s character keeps changing over and over. I saw Tom as a descent and respectful family man, who is responsible and a great father.
It was brilliant how you brought up Tom’s passed crush for Valerie in page 47,48, and 49. Yet, I did not like, the fact that Tom rushed to go and see Valerie, when he suspected where she was living all this time. He should have visited her a long time ago, since he loved her that much. I did not understand the scene where they met(p 55). It would have been more interesting to see Tom confessing to Valerie without showing up any emotion, because he is a married man. I was lost, once I see that Tom had a sudden hidden love for Isabel. What happened? Did he suddenly want to replace Valerie by Isabel? If I remembered, Valerie is still present, and living not far from him. Is Valerie too old for him? This love for Isabel changes Tom’s character completely. Moreover, Tom reveals himself as a coward and a self-centered man, since we can understand that in Baxley hall(p 81, 82, 83), he had to lie in order to save himself, and get promoted, while living a bad image for the poor Isabel. I have no problem with the scene, since it helps developed an interesting story; however, the fact that Tom is implicated gets me confused, cause I saw another man within him. I know that Man changes all the time, yet not that drastically. While I still appreciate the fact that he let Victor help Barry, I can’t understand how can he flips sides that quickly. Is it because he wanted to repair his faults, or is because he wanted Victor to forgive him for everything? I just wanted to say that this character is too complex and it could have been way simpler.
I really can’t get enough of Marissa, Kent, Roman, and Victor. They are really interesting characters and they bring a lot of fun into the story.
I like Sarah’s Character, but I think that she should have been harder on Tom.
I was really disappointed by the fact that on page 67, Victor puked. He could have broken his plate, or even sipped juice on the table. I don’t think puking is a good idea, it is disgusting and really unacceptable for a young adolescent to do on the dinner table.
I thought that the way you painted Barry and Amanda was genius and could not have been better. I like the fact that Barry had the chance to be with Isabel, but I hate the fact that Isabel did at least hug Victor and thanks him for all he has been doing lately.
The end was succulent; I loved it. This work is adorable, and I wish you good luck into selling it.
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