Other Reviews by Condrashoff 47

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  READY FOR TAKE-OFF
  A review of Flight Paths
  by Condrashoff on 06/24/2004
  Flight Paths is an endearing sp for children. It is beautifully written and structurally sound. The story is fresh and original, and the concept is unique. The characters are clear and intriguing, and the dialogue is excellent. Ella's backstory, although sad, brought depth to the story. I enjoyed the fairly talk and the brilliant description of their strange world. The only... Flight Paths is an endearing sp for children. It is beautifully written and structurally sound. The story is fresh and original, and the concept is unique. The characters are clear and intriguing, and the dialogue is excellent. Ella's backstory, although sad, brought depth to the story. I enjoyed the fairly talk and the brilliant description of their strange world. The only negatives are too petty to bother with. This is what it is . Not an oscar winner, but a solid script to make into an animated film, or other.Great imagination, excellent writing. Bravo!!!! I definitely recommend this for production. I'd take my kids to this. Good luck. read
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  IT'S A GOOD LIFE
  A review of Life In A Red Dress
  by Condrashoff on 05/15/2004
  I can tell from reading this screenplay that the author must be a perfectionist. When I started to read it, I couldn't stop and time went by quickly. The Character development, and dialogue were excellent, and the description was crisp. The story was good with turning points that grab, and a believable plot. The only fault I can make here, is that there needs to be another... I can tell from reading this screenplay that the author must be a perfectionist. When I started to read it, I couldn't stop and time went by quickly. The Character development, and dialogue were excellent, and the description was crisp. The story was good with turning points that grab, and a believable plot. The only fault I can make here, is that there needs to be another suspect. (I am trying to avoid spoilers), Try to either create a suspect with the characters you already have, or add a new character. Otherwise, not much else needs to be done. Excellent structure by the way, and three cheers. Good work. A producer ought to pick this one up asap. read
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  DRIVE ME CRAZY
  A review of DRIVER
  by Condrashoff on 02/15/2004
  This SP is fast paced and has an interesting premise, with a good couple of twist at the end. I can't fault the structure either. My big problem with this SP is that the characters are all so shallow and crass. I didn't care about any of them. Val's character was unrealistic. Who would a) not totally freak if they saw the apparition of Mike while driving and b) welcome fondling... This SP is fast paced and has an interesting premise, with a good couple of twist at the end. I can't fault the structure either. My big problem with this SP is that the characters are all so shallow and crass. I didn't care about any of them. Val's character was unrealistic. Who would a) not totally freak if they saw the apparition of Mike while driving and b) welcome fondling with said apparition soon afterward.The list goes on. So, I suggest making Val more real, and more likeable. Plus, vary the manners these characters have. They all seem to have none at all. They are all of the same low moral fibre. I'm not judging them, I'm judging the fact that they seem identical. Not realistic. For us to suspend reality for your premise, we need to believe the characters. Otherwise, you are onto an interesting story. Keep at it. read