Review of: Stay with me 

reviewed by StiK on 02/16/2010
StiK
Interesting little horror flick
There's a lot to enjoy here. Some nice camera angles set a good feeling of being watched. Some of the framing didn't feel quite right. I felt I was seeing too much of the ground whilst looking at the house. Some other shots would have been nice when the car was driving up to the house. An interior shot maybe in the car.

Obvious parrallels to the Japanese horrors were evident. The music was a bit irritating. I think all it needed was a few chimes and atmospheric horns or something with foley. Sometimes silence can be terrifying.

Great work, I think you could improve on this just by adding a couple of shots and dialing down the music. Keep up the good work.

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