Review of: The Yacht
reviewed by Wordlover on 09/26/2009
Somehow I had gotten the idea that this trip was to help their relationship, but instead did it strain it or end it or was it good? Yes if you haven't figured it out yet, you lost me. It was an interesting story and very sexual but had no real feelings. The emotion wasn't there. You skirmed the surface of it, but just didn't quite get there. All in all it was an interesting story just seemed to be lacking something.
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