Review of: Wrath
reviewed by noahruderman on 06/14/2006
The author has an original voice and I enjoyed reading his story. I think the mix of horror/comedy can be a good one, and here it is for most of the time, although I feel it can be both funnier and scarier with more horror (more actual violence and shown intensity.) I also feel the "stakes" are not high enough. Even in a semi-comedic environment, we want to feel real danger for the characters to coincide with our feeling for their plight, which there doesn't seem to be enough here. Also, the first half of the script seems too slow, and is harder to get into in order to enjoy the second half. In conclusion, I like the concept, the characters and a lot of the dialogue but think the stakes and intensity can be increased. Good luck.
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