Review of: Brief Love 

reviewed by FloydTheSecond on 08/24/2007
FloydTheSecond
It was brief, but was it love?
With the limitations imposed upon the filmmaker, the aesthetics and production design are really immaterial here.

So what we're really evaluating is the story.

Overall, the story is what it is. It's not terribly creative nor is it terribly bad. It's just two people who share a connection from across a busy street. That's all fine and good, but why do they then pass each other if they are attracted to one another? Is it simply to create the excuse for the unwitting dude to be hit by the unaware driver? If so, the needs of the story could have been better served. In the end the woman abandons the poor shmuck who couldn't make it across the road again (or wait for the light to change again). I guess I really just want the story to have a purpose, which is really what is lacking here. At the end of the short "film" all I'm left with is to wonder what I'm supposed to take from that...

I suppose there was probably some sort of restrictions on time to come up with the story for this competition as well, which would explain a lot. But at the end of the day, people will only remember how good you are based upon the last film of yours that they've seen...

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