Much With Little
I liked that you did the most with what you had. I get what you were going for, but I got lost along the way. They didn't like each other and then flew off together? I know I'm missing something. The way you put it together was very creative and different. The story just needs some more work.
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A review of Nightmaresby **DELETED ACCOUNT** on 11/23/2013It seems unfair to write a review of a film that isn't the final edit so, please, take my comments with a grain of salt. I found the narrative disjointed, granted it's a dream and dreams are disjointed; however the audience still needs to feel like the director is taking them someplace. The boy needs to be more of an active participant. He spends most of the story laying... read
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