I think this could have been a little shorter, it started getting funny when he was sitting in the toilet. But overall I thought there was a good idea here that could be developed further. The twist at the end was nice and works well, cool stuff! Look forward to more!
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A review of The Voidby virtualfilm on 03/25/2007Althought the story to this isn't consistent enough for me, this deserves a high credit to the way its shot and what it was shot on. Anyone would have thought this was high budget, the style and camera are very nice, which kept me watching throughout. Would liked there to be something uplifting at the end, why always pay the price through death? You could think of recutting... read
A review of The Meetingby virtualfilm on 03/25/2007This had some nice elements to it, the charracters mannerisms were very well thought out, didn't really understand the black sludge on wall. Felt this was unnesscary CGI but still kept me watching. As a short I felt it lacked real conclusion, but this could work as a feature idea. The charracters did to much in a short space of time for me, I like to be left with something... read
A review of "50" the movieby virtualfilm on 03/11/2007I enjoyed this short but would have liked less of the text to keep it rolling and keep the motion of the piece. The idea is very strong and I thought some of the elements to this were very funny, especially when you weren't seen by the young lady. To make this funnier it needs work at the script, get the timing finer, timing is essential for comedy. There are alot of elements... read