Unfortunately, while reading Parashites I couldn't help thinking it was something I'd seen before. Yes, it is a new twist on a old horror genre but I didn't see it moving passed that point.
The characters were well written (especially Gary, whose character I enjoyed) and there were some interesting variations on the theme. But push comes to shove I found myself losing interest in the screenplay half way though.
Overall I think it was a good try and a good effort and look forward to reading more work from this writer to see what else he can do. Good writing for a first or second try.
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