This is far and away the best short story I've read on TS and there have been some pretty good ones. I'm very hesitant to make any comments at all because I wouldn't change a word of this. But let me just venture this: I couldn't tell if the inner dialogue of the mom, which was resigned and submissive in tone, was self deceptive or just sarcastic. For that reason, I couldn't tell if the bumper sticker was an epiphany or just the last straw. Either way, the story was fantastic.
Review of: Happy Mudder's Day
reviewed by LBarbarell on 01/31/2011
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A review of The Infinite Fluby LBarbarell on 06/25/2012I wonder if that boss is going to attend Bob's funeral. Except for the fact that the lips were out of synch with the sound, probably a web issue and not the fault of the film, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Things I liked included: - The boss sounded real. Basically uncaring, humorless, and completely lacking imagination. Good voice talent. - The onscreen actor was sufficiently... read
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