This was quite good fun. Film was cleanly shot. Lighting and sound were clean. Editing was slick and pacing was fine.
I really liked the Nazi mashed potato and the choice of word "hopefully" at the end. Both made me smile.
The only thing that didn't work for me really was the choice of the Nazis as the source of Utopia. Whilst watching it I couldn't quite work out why this was meant to be a source of Utopia for the young man. There are obviously a lot of political connatations and getting laughs from Adolf is difficult.
Obviously, I understood your choice, when the the title page appears at the end. But for me this title gag was not quite strong enough to justify the time I had spent a little confused by what was happening in the main story.
But overall a fun watch. Best of luck.
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