Other Reviews by Lethal Lizard 19

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  Review of Do You Smell That?
  A review of Do You Smell That?
  by Lethal Lizard on 08/28/2009
  The subject matter was an intersting one and I liked how everything went on in the patients head. I feel like I wanted to know the patient more, why did they have the crash? Were they the daughter, the mother what? This would all add to the despair and depression and make the charecter more believable. I liked the irony of the nurse biting the dust instead and the subject... The subject matter was an intersting one and I liked how everything went on in the patients head.
  
  I feel like I wanted to know the patient more, why did they have the crash? Were they the daughter, the mother what? This would all add to the despair and depression and make the charecter more believable.
  
  I liked the irony of the nurse biting the dust instead and the subject feeling a new found love for life, perhaps the impending doom could have driven the subject to drag herself out of bed? Could we have more description around the fire spreading?
  
  Good story idea, just needed filling out for me. read
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  call it snow
  A review of Snow or, Slipknot or, A Death Rewritten
  by Lethal Lizard on 08/02/2009
  An unusual story idea and presented in a different way. Both of which I liked. The news articles at the start where a good example of using different media to tell a story even when it was still written. You just tended to over repeat certain words in this section which meant that it didnt read right. Perhaps a reveiw of this bit? I liked the exploration of a mans depressed... An unusual story idea and presented in a different way. Both of which I liked.
  
  The news articles at the start where a good example of using different media to tell a story even when it was still written. You just tended to over repeat certain words in this section which meant that it didnt read right. Perhaps a reveiw of this bit?
  
  I liked the exploration of a mans depressed state in relation to losing his job, the idea is sound but I think this could have been expanded a great deal. It just wasnt enough in my opinion for a man to take his own life.
  
  Absolutely loved the description of the falling snow. Inspired, made me want to go and lie in it myself!! read
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  rambling review
  A review of THE RAMBLINGS OF AN ODD MAN
  by Lethal Lizard on 08/02/2009
  Brilliant and sweet, fantastic short story. It was like the rain man meets film noir. I like that it was short and punchy, didnt waste time with desciptions of the characters which left it open for the mind to wander and imagine how I want it to be. I always try and add a bit of constructive criticsm to my reviews but I cant find a bad word to say about this! Length and format... Brilliant and sweet, fantastic short story. It was like the rain man meets film noir.
  
  I like that it was short and punchy, didnt waste time with desciptions of the characters which left it open for the mind to wander and imagine how I want it to be.
  
  I always try and add a bit of constructive criticsm to my reviews but I cant find a bad word to say about this! Length and format was the ultimate short story. read