Review of: The Water Carrier 

reviewed by Cheyenne30 on 02/03/2012
Cheyenne30
Rooting
The Water Carrier was an interesting take on the shortage of water around the world. Though there were some details that were lacking (i.e. how did the main break?). There was great detail about how they came up with the idea to become water carriers. There werenít many details about what happens when they get different jobs. Explore that aspect of the story if you would like to make it longer. Over all I found myself thrilled with the story and rooting for the main characters.

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