Review of: Koz Baker 

reviewed by Cenydd Ros on 11/17/2010
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Cenydd Ros
Short but sweet. Credited Review
A very well written satirical piece. I mostly care nothing about sports, but this is a piece more about people and superficiality of modern society, rather than about sports. It is rather short and aside from being a work of satire, to bring the ironical smile, is kind of lacking in content in terms of story depth. This is not a negative critique, as I do not know how long a piece (word count) you were trying to achieve. The story is simple and fast, but this is not bad.

It is extremely well worded and a pleasure to read. I enjoyed it, and that is all that really matters in the end, I suppose. I think others would enjoy it to. I found no errors in my once over and judging from your bio you are a pro, so I am not surprised it is as cleanly written as it is.

Dont really have any suggestions to give you on how to improve this. Style and wording are about perfect. For the length of the story, I would say you have done as good a job as anyone could hope to do.

Thanks for the enjoyable read. All the best.

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