Other Reviews by culinarygrad@gmail.com 9

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  Man was I scared
  A review of PROP HOUSE V-2
  by culinarygrad@gmail.com on 06/08/2011
  I think your spin on at a night in a museum was much more fun than the movies that subsequently went out. I mean really. What's a night at the museum without the three stooges? Of course you had the open-mindedness to include none other than that of William Shatner. He is the quintessential vodka in the grapefruit for any sci-fi/museum movie. Bring on the flying saucers and... I think your spin on at a night in a museum was much more fun than the movies that subsequently went out. I mean really. What's a night at the museum without the three stooges? Of course you had the open-mindedness to include none other than that of William Shatner. He is the quintessential vodka in the grapefruit for any sci-fi/museum movie. Bring on the flying saucers and the Space Victims. Maybe Jerry Springer was a stretch, but he's as surreal as any alien out there. Jude, Dog, and the Hulk were perfect hollywood outlaws on Ventura Blvd. Maybe they could have hidden out in topanga. Did Gable really have false teeth? Keep that a secret. Eddy and Jack were perfect in their character. They kept it real amidst the unreal. The "Stone" was pivitol, and gave validity to the possible truth of it all. And who the hell didn't love Marylin Monroe. Eddy did for sure. Nice script. "Here's lookin' at you, kid." read
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  Smells like Gunsmoke
  A review of Out of the Badlands (3rd Draft)
  by culinarygrad@gmail.com on 06/08/2011
  This was pretty damned funny to me. Your sense of humor stood out. And, somehow, you injected a cute little love story. A cute spin on what should be made into a movie, or a television series. The characters are there. Now, I could have done without all the religion, with Solomon and all, but maybe because you know the Bible so well, you threw it in. There were definitely... This was pretty damned funny to me. Your sense of humor stood out. And, somehow, you injected a cute little love story. A cute spin on what should be made into a movie, or a television series. The characters are there. Now, I could have done without all the religion, with Solomon and all, but maybe because you know the Bible so well, you threw it in. There were definitely some lines that I thought were cool as hell: Travis "There's the law and then there's justice". Eliz: "Vengance won't give you peace. It's a slow poison that will kill you sure as any bullet". Mathias: "God likes me better than you". Jefferson: "Besides, a sense of humor is important. Without it, I'd end up like you." : "Your pursuit of such a creature is a fool's errand."
  Now, I really didn't need "...a maelstrom of papers". I would have settled for "...a pile of papers." Don't use fancy words in setting up a scene, especially in a western. It doesn't fit the scene, if you know what I mean. Other than that, I enjoyed it and good luck on pitching it. read
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  wow
  A review of Dr. Towers' Babel (rev)
  by culinarygrad@gmail.com on 05/01/2011
  First, I liked your use of the word "twixt". Imaginative, a trip, a journey . . . imaginative. I didn't mind the length at all. I enjoy reading and going to the places the author invites me to visit . . . journey. Mind expanding. Mmmmmmmmmm .. . . . Thought provoking in a delicious sort of way . . . not forced . . . I wanted to take the trip . . . adventure out. I... First, I liked your use of the word "twixt".
  
  Imaginative, a trip, a journey . . . imaginative.
  
  I didn't mind the length at all. I enjoy reading and going to the places the author invites me to visit . . . journey.
  
  Mind expanding.
  
  Mmmmmmmmmm .. . . .
  
  Thought provoking in a delicious sort of way . . . not forced . . . I wanted to take the trip . . . adventure out.
  
  I love space and its quiet sparkling omniprecense . . . every "night" . . .
  
  Hope, dreams, wonder, escape, dark, unsure, unknown, magnetic, mysterious, quiet
  
  
  Science, god, time travel, towers, denial, faith, belief, energy, souls, mystery . . .
  
  Universal questions . . . maybe we aren't made to learn the answer(s) but are made to ask the questions and yearn . . .
  
  Thanks. read